… or at least the layers of red on the page do. This has turned out to be a bit of a tricky scene. As my editor has pointed out, my heroine doesn’t say anything – or hardly anything – in two consecutive scenes, which is not so good. On the other hand, I want my heroine to be somewhat diffident in these scenes, soooo……
I’ve settled on letting her exclaim “A bear?” at one point.
And now, as my editor tells me, I need to find a stronger ending for the bear scene.
*scratching my head*