The Last of Monday

I completely forgot to tell you: at the beginning of last week I finished the last chapter of BEWITCHED!!! Yay! Yet at the moment I still got two different versions of the last sentence. Which do you like better?

And together they walked on, while behind them the robin told the reborn world of a new morn.

OR

And together they walk on, into the reborn world, while behind them the robin heralded a new morn.

And now …

… I only have to finish those 150 pages in the middle of the book. 🙂