Take this sentence: “Here, more than before, human qualities mix with those of a monster.” (= elaborating on a passage about hero in Teresa Medeiros’s The Bride & the Beast). It’s not quite right, is it? “Here, more than before, human qualities blend with those of a monster” is much better, isn’t it? These things drive me nuts! NUTS!!!! *head desk* *sob*
And the worst thing is: I’ve run out of chocolate!