Fixing the 1st Chapter

This past weekend I ordered bookmarks for BETRAYAL and put together a little teaser brochure. In order to do this, I had to fix Chapter I — which really terrified me, ’cause, hey, I’m suffering from my usual mid-chapter-3-blues and then everything I write seems to be crap. Sooo …. imagine my surprise when I realized that all it would take to fix Chapter I was to change a word.

One word.

Now Frau Else doesn’t cackle, but chuckle, and Bob’s my uncle! 🙂

Oh happy day!